Thursday, October 2, 2014

Thursday,October 2nd

                                                             The Frog Prince

  One day a princess was walking in the woods of her Castle Property when she was grounded from all electronics and hanging out with her royal friends. While passing the pond she saw an odd looking frog with a little gold crown on his head. She stared intensely at the peculiar frog  wondering were it came from then the oddest thing of all about the frog it spoke. In a deep voice it said if you take a picture it will last longer. Then hopped over to her and gave her the run down on why he was a frog it turned out he was prince that owed a witch money and that's why he was a frog. He told her he was the prince of a nearby kingdom and if she kisses him and turns back that He will marry he and make the strongest kingdom on the continent. She agreed and kissed the frog prince then she turned to a fat dear fly  and the frog ate her. Then the frog filling accomplished muttered under his breath works every time.

2 comments:

  1. I like the twist in the end of your fractured fairytale. It really went outside the box!

    one thing I would like to point out are the excessive typos, you should really fix those, and put what the frog says in quotation marks.

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  2. This was pretty good, the only thing I would fix is to check your grammar and maybe make it longer. Other than that, great job!

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