Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Tuesday,October 21

          
                                                               Old Man

             Caroline thought  the old man reminded her of someone if she didn't know the person.
she studied the man to the hat that he was wearing to the tips of his loafers and still couldn't figure out who. Then her bus approached and she stepped on then awoke. It was a dream but a weird one she thought about it a little bit while she was up but didn't think about it to much and continued her morning routine. Then she walked outside to the cool crisp fall morning to her bus stop and noticed the same old man from her dream sitting on the bench across from her. She was stunned and confused for a moment in time she rubbed her eyes a couple more times to make sure that this wasn't her eyes fooling her and the old man was really there. So dazed and confused from what she was seeing she decided to go across the street and speak to the old man but as soon as she made the move to cross the street she saw her bus approaching from the corner. Disappointed and somewhat and somewhat intrigued
she got on the bus and thought about the situation.

1 comment:

  1. Constructive = it kind of suddenly ended
    Positive = it got some good wording to it

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